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Persuasive Writing Bump It Up Wall – Year 5

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14 pages (PDF, Word)|Suitable for Grade: 5

A visual display for your classroom to help students ‘bump up’ their persuasive writing.

The aim of this visible learning classroom display is to help students ‘bump up’ their persuasive writing. The display enables students to identify the approximate level of a persuasive text they have written, then use the goals provided to ‘uplevel’ their writing.

Print, cut and laminate each component of the display. This display includes:

  • a title banner
  • four example texts of varying levels (simple to complex)
  • statements describing the structural and language features included in each example text
  • goals for ‘bumping up’ each example text.

To create the display:

  • Print out (and laminate) all of the components.
  • Place the title banner at the top of the display.
  • Place the texts in order (1-4) horizontally.
  • List the ‘This piece of writing includes…’ statements vertically underneath the corresponding text.
  • List the ‘This piece of writing could be improved by…’ goals vertically underneath the corresponding text.

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  NSW Curriculum alignment

  Victorian Curriculum alignment

  • VCELY329

    Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive print and multimodal texts, choosing text structures, language features, images and sound appropriate to purpose and audience

  Australian Curriculum alignment

  • ACELY1704

    Plan, draft and publish imaginative, informative and persuasive print and multimodal texts, choosing text structures, language features, images and sound appropriate to purpose and audience

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This is a fantastic resource. The exemplars are especially helpful. I’d love to see a similar resource for the other text types studied in Stage 3 (e.g., information reports, explanations, narratives, etc).

David Booler · Jul 10th, 2019

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Kristian · Jul 11th, 2019

Resource Updates

  • Changed this resource from 'Upper Years' to 'Year 5'. Small updates to the texts to improve consistency across the different year level Persuasive Writing Bump It Up Walls.

    Change by Tom (Teach Starter) Jan 13th, 2020

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