Lesson 13: Narrative Skills – Proofreading and Editing

 Lesson Plan

Tuning In

• Choose a slide from the Editing Passages PowerPoint – Year 3 or the Editing Passages PowerPoint – Year 4 to display on the board. Edit the chosen text together as a class and write the corrected passage on the board. Ask the students:
  • What strategies did you use when trying to find the incorrect spellings and missing punctuation?
  • What else might you need to look for when proofreading and editing your own writing?
  • Why is proofreading and editing your own writing so important?
• Chose another slide. Allow the students to work in pairs to edit the text and write the corrected passage into their workbooks. Discuss the answer slide together as a class.

Teacher Instruction

• Explain to the students that they are going to proofread and edit the narrative text they wrote in the previous lesson.
• Discuss some editing strategies with the students (these could be recorded into workbooks for future reference). These might include:
  • using a checklist for text structure and language features
  • reading the text aloud to see if it sounds correct when spoken
  • using common symbols when proofreading to make editing easier e.g. underlining all incorrect spellings
  • using a bright pen or pencil when proofreading to ensure editing symbols stand out
  • addressing one aspect of writing at a time, rather than concurrently e.g. looking for punctuation errors, then spelling errors, then grammatical errors.

Guided/Independent Learning

• In their writing pairs, allow the students time to thoroughly proofread and edit their narratives. Monitor and support the students as required.

Wrapping Up

• Allow each pair to swap their narratives with another pair. After reading the text, each pair is to provide feedback using the ‘Three Stars and A Wish’ technique (three positives and one suggestion for improvement). Teachers may wish to collect the students’ narratives in order to informally monitor student progress.

 Differentiation

Extending Students

• Allow fast finishers to write an editing passage for the class containing a certain number of spelling and punctuation errors.

Supporting Students

• Allow students who find reading and writing challenging to work with a partner during the editing activity.

 Assessment Strategies

Suggested Assessment Strategies

• used strategic whole class or individual questioning
• observed student participation during learning activities
• recorded student progress on a checklist
• annotated student work samples
• collected and reviewed student work samples
• facilitated whole class or peer feedback sessions
• encouraged student self-reflection
• administered formal assessment tasks.

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